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rather mild. The shorter a syntactic unit, the more it resists being
streched over two prosodic units. The end of most lines in excerpt 1
coincides with the end of a well-articulated subordinate syntactic unit.
Only in two instances the reader may become aware, after the event,
that the unit is run on to the next line: "and want love's majesty", and
"sent before my time". The loose-end chunk left in the first line is five
and six lyllables long, respectively. The complementary chunk in the
next line, in the former case coincides with a whole line, and with a six-
syllable-long hemistich in the latter. So, these instances of enjambment
aren't very strained. In such a structure, the best strategy for a
performer would be to clearly articulate the end of each line except these
two lines; and to impose some unifying pattern on the whole passage.
In the present instance, an emphasis on the repeated referring phrase
(italicized in excerpt 1) would do. In the performance under discussion,
a clearly demonstrable "crescendo" pattern too has been superimposed
on the repetitive pattern. In the recording under discussion there is a
curious variant of this. In excerpt 2, one complex sentence is running
through four lines. At the end of line 1, the syntax is incomplete, and a
sequel is strongly expected. At the end of lines 2 and 3 no such
incompleteness is perceived. Nonetheless, there is a feeling that the
transition from line 3 to line 4 is rather hasty. The endings of lines 1, 2,
and 4 in excerpt 2 are exceptionally well-articulated; whereas the end of
line 3 is conspicuously underarticulated, against all syntactic and
prosodic odds. This is a well-known structural device in poetic
structures too, namely, that the shape of the last but one unit must be
considerably weakened, so as to increase the requiredness of the last
unit, and the integration of the whole.5 |
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Though the speech goes on to reveal his plans, Gloucester's relentless self- description comes to an end. |